tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post3569111700270091153..comments2023-05-10T02:32:44.356-07:00Comments on Baavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapnaa...: ~~~...सांझ ढलते अपने घर चलीं...~~~baavrivitihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05694400635981955189noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-74092284011559985552010-06-30T17:36:33.046-07:002010-06-30T17:36:33.046-07:00bahut bahut shukriya sabhi ka :)
@jaggedarrowhead...bahut bahut shukriya sabhi ka :)<br /><br />@jaggedarrowhead: i have a lot to improve :D<br /><br />@abhijeet: thank your friend from my side :)baavrivitihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05694400635981955189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-19495040992037492882010-06-26T07:35:35.461-07:002010-06-26T07:35:35.461-07:00some of these couplets are by far your best...simp...some of these couplets are by far your best...simple and profound :)delhidreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-52089847645450673882010-06-25T23:54:30.690-07:002010-06-25T23:54:30.690-07:00Awesome..!!! :)*Thumbs Up* 4 ur poem dear.. keep i...Awesome..!!! :)*Thumbs Up* 4 ur poem dear.. keep it up* મારી રચના *https://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-26587313302871812692010-06-25T20:07:40.389-07:002010-06-25T20:07:40.389-07:00Had difficulty understanding a few words. Got a fr...Had difficulty understanding a few words. Got a friend to translate. She said your language was simply soulful :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16329880800988327058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-42565879529825381652010-06-25T11:32:35.184-07:002010-06-25T11:32:35.184-07:00शब्द विहीन! :)शब्द विहीन! :)Ghumakkar Punithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10684268427131085894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-36968345556773620842010-06-25T05:49:05.996-07:002010-06-25T05:49:05.996-07:00बहुत सुंदरबहुत सुंदरAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-81775994372661212232010-06-25T04:07:58.798-07:002010-06-25T04:07:58.798-07:00waah...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai..
hoth jalte...waah...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.. <br /><br />hoth jalte hai hamare muskurane se<br />phir bhi koi shikwa nahi jamene seNabeel Nnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-8174229616367087842010-06-25T00:46:41.904-07:002010-06-25T00:46:41.904-07:00Awesome!!!Awesome!!!winniethepoohihttp://catawampusme.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-88470163964236782492010-06-24T22:09:51.506-07:002010-06-24T22:09:51.506-07:00Nice I liked it. I think you should try and publis...Nice I liked it. I think you should try and publish a small booklet kind of thing of all your short poemsJaggedArrowHeadhttp://www.twitter.com/JaggedArrowHeadnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-21833702653544114282010-06-24T21:12:23.866-07:002010-06-24T21:12:23.866-07:00Very nice Viti! :):)Very nice Viti! :):)Prerna Munshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12952201469278291475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4971483872107325364.post-34794386342293855932010-06-24T19:03:53.431-07:002010-06-24T19:03:53.431-07:00विती एक हवा का झौँका - बेधड़क ऊड़ी अपने मंन्जिल् कि ...विती एक हवा का झौँका - बेधड़क ऊड़ी अपने मंन्जिल् कि और्Amareshhttp://www.amareshrath.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com