Monday, January 18, 2010

~~~...Khwaish hai...~~~

mukammal tum meri ho jao, khwaish hai
har dum bas mujhe tadpao, khwaish hai
shikan dikhe kabhi mere bistar par 'Noor'
dekh kar use tum yaad aao, khwaish hai
jo uthe lab mere muskurahat ko god lene
unke sang tum bhi khilkhilao, khwaish hai
taraana jo sunun kabhi naseem ka main
hoothon se tum chhoo jao, khwaish hai
rukh-e-siraaj par jo koi abr gesoo sa ho
usko lamha-e-'Viti' kar jao, khwaish hai
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12 comments:

  1. harshita sharmaJanuary 18, 2010 at 2:35 AM

    behad khoobsurat :)

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  2. ShakirJanuary 18, 2010 at 2:36 AM

    wah!

    awesome awesome! beautiful!

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  3. ShakthiJanuary 18, 2010 at 2:46 AM

    Wow ! Zabar10 !

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  4. Simply PoetJanuary 18, 2010 at 2:49 AM

    beautiful lines loved it
    Do post it on the site for others' to appreciate!!

    www.simplypoet.com

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  5. ShaanJanuary 18, 2010 at 2:51 AM

    Nice! dint knw u were such a lovely writer! :-) Why dont u post hindi poems using hindi fonts? They would look more beautiful, imo..

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  6. * મારી રચના *January 18, 2010 at 2:58 AM

    Khwaish hain ki teri har khawish puri ho..

    U r Allrounder..!!! keep it up....

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  7. RichaJanuary 18, 2010 at 3:35 AM

    wat else do i say besides.. it touched my heart :)

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  8. SonamJanuary 18, 2010 at 7:58 AM

    Awesome.. So so beautiful..main kabhi kucchh aisa vyaktt kar paata,khwaish hai!!

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  9. baavrivitiJanuary 20, 2010 at 9:23 PM

    thanks a lot everyone! bahut bahut shukriya!
    and will work on hindi transliteration sometime soon..

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  10. neerjaJanuary 26, 2010 at 7:20 AM

    tumhari shabdon ki nazakat
    din b din aur khoobsoorat ho, khwaish hai

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  11. KyraJanuary 27, 2010 at 10:21 AM

    beautiful...you write beautifully and in few words express so much..keep writing.

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  12. baavrivitiJanuary 27, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    thanks neerja ji and meeta! :)

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