Saturday, October 31, 2009

~~~...Tum ho saahil samjho...~~~

meri baaton se kuch samjho to yeh samjho
mujhe apni adaon ka bas ik aashiq samjho

ek lat tumhare rukh pe bhikhar jaaye kabhi
sujha dene ke mujhe kabhi to kabil samjho

mujhe talaash hai rehti har subah-o-shaam,
nigaah-e-'Noor' ka mujhe tum kayal samjho

main dariya hun, dhoondhun manzil, jismein
khwaish khone ki hai, tum ho saahil samjho

zindagi 'Viti' guzaare bandagi mein, hai dua
tumko khuda kehne ke mujhe layak samjho...
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 31, 2009 at 9:16 PM

    again a poem touching the heart and the romantic chord. Have you thought of someday compiling a book of your works? When you become famous, we can boast that we know this celeb

    best wishes

    Sarbjit

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  2. baavrivitiOctober 31, 2009 at 9:27 PM

    thank you so much! but i am definitely not that good :D

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  3. AnonymousOctober 31, 2009 at 9:41 PM

    Heera kabhi nahin kehta key woh beshakeemat hai..

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  4. baavrivitiOctober 31, 2009 at 9:46 PM

    haha shukriya itni tareef ka :D

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  5. thakurMayankNovember 1, 2009 at 1:17 AM

    Viti Viti viti !When i was reading this ,i was just smiling & thinking about reciting this 2 "my NOOR" .. Really it added a color,that is not available in real word, to my love .. hats off to you .. :)

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  6. baavrivitiNovember 1, 2009 at 1:52 AM

    thank you mayank :)

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  7. Rohit kapoorNovember 1, 2009 at 11:47 PM

    gud going
    :-)

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