Sunday, November 8, 2009

~~~...Taraana de diya...~~~


aankhon mein ik maykhaana de diya 
beghar ko ik naya thikaana de diya 
chaahat ki ye aarzoo aayi kahan se
besabr khwaishon ko aashiyana de diya
kore kaaghaz par kuch lakeeren thi
unhe nazm kehne ka bahaana de diya
bheed mein gum jaana tha 'Viti' ko to
'Noor' ne lekin hasin weeraana de diya
sunsaan, anjaan, gumnaam thi hasti
chhupchaap zubaan ko taraana de diya...
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5 comments:

  1. thakurMayankNovember 9, 2009 at 6:35 AM

    Aur Vitasta Shah Ne Humein Khone Ka Eik Aur Bahana De Diya :-)

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  2. !!अक्षय-मन!!November 9, 2009 at 4:14 PM

    viti aap bahut hi accha likhti hain
    ek acchi gazal jise padkar mai thoda hairaan hua ek to aap india mai nahi hain aur itni kam umr mai itna accha itna accha to mai bhi nahi likhta............


    mai jal nahi raha huin okkkkkkkkkkk

    keep it up..........
    aise hi likhte raho..........
    God bless u........

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  3. baavrivitiNovember 9, 2009 at 5:45 PM

    thanks akshay!

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  4. swapnilNovember 11, 2009 at 12:32 PM

    wah wah !!!!

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  5. baavrivitiNovember 11, 2009 at 10:09 PM

    shukriya :)

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