Friday, August 20, 2010

~~~...repeat...~~~

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

this cycle is your gift to me.
i will break it, soon.

you'll be hurt, of course.
i will be miserable too.

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

i tried to break the cycle.
i failed, will try again.

you escaped it last time.
this time, you're in.

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

you were hurt, so was i.
we're friends now.

neither of us can escape.
we're both messed up.

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

how long can we go on?
it hurts everyday.

the 'noor' is dying here.
'viti' withers too.

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

rage.  hate.  melting.  love.

repeat.

repeat.

repeat.

9 comments:

  1. I like the experiment...'cu the essence of the idea remains the same through & through :-)

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  2. can relate to this one A LOT... ahem! I should hunt down some more adjectives to praise the way u play with words. Loved this one.

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  3. hahaha
    and the cycle remains in motion, endlessly!

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  4. It is surely truth of most of ours life.. Nice one :) :)

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  5. I like the play of words and the undercurrent of the post.

    repeat.

    :-)

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  6. Pretty emotional one this.!

    Great post as ever.

    The way you bring in the words like baavri, viti in every post is truly appreciable.

    Cheers
    Sanjay

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  7. another good one....keep 'em coming :)

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