किस रास्ते के किस मोड़ पर छोडोगी
इसका भी हिसाब दे देती जब notice दिया था
दिल खाली करने का
मैंने तो दो दिन ही काटे थे
शायद कोठी को गिरा कर, बहुमंजिला इमारत
बनाई जाएगी जल्द ही
मुझे flat के दाम ज़रूर बता देना
सोचना कुछ, समझना कुछ, बोलना कुछ और...
[disclaimer: in case you will be worried, and will start asking me questions... i wrote this in a rage induced creativity spike, it has nothing to do with anything in my life :) ]
[disclaimer: in case you will be worried, and will start asking me questions... i wrote this in a rage induced creativity spike, it has nothing to do with anything in my life :) ]
Wrapped in riddle... nice work!
ReplyDeletelooking back is such a pleasure when it is all about good times, but other way is pretty difficult . well explained..
ReplyDeletesamajhne waale samajh gaye hain
Beautifully written, Baavi.. love the way it ends.. this is the first time am on your blog.. I totally love it.. I read a lot of Hindi poetry but cannot write :((
ReplyDeleteThis poem reminded me of Javed Akhtar's lines 'Badi badi imaaraton se ghir gaya mera ghar, kuch logon ne mere hisse ka suraj bhi cheen liya..'
Keep writing!
नवी मुंबई के हालात बयाँ कर दिए बावरी ने :) या शायद पुरे real estate का...
ReplyDeleteglad you all like it :D
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