मेरे साथ चले, मिले नहीं तुम...
As the rain falls I wait for your call
Only thing that'll brighten my day.
Hearing a sweet voice, a soft drawl
One way to chase the clouds away...
गरजे बहुत, बरसे नहीं तुम
मेरे साथ चले, मिले नहीं तुम...
Lonely black dot on the white wall,
Don't you dare to move, please stay.
You are a muse, a distraction for me,
Watching you, I pass hours, as I sway...
गरजे बहुत, बरसे नहीं तुम
मेरे साथ चले, मिले नहीं तुम...
Nice style, never seen it earlier and I am very tempted to make use of it sometime. Great blend of emotions between the languages. I am already singing, there is a tune out there..beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou love the rains just like me, but that love triggers such beautiful feelings in you.
Hats off !
=)
beautiful.. Rains are inspirations for many.. the mesmerizing views of rains makes us all fall in love. We can just spent hours staring at the rains.
ReplyDeletemere saath chale, mile nahi tum.........kya baat hai Viti jee. :D
ReplyDeletelol both the stanzas are true! :) guess we all do it :)
ReplyDeleteYou Inspire me to write :)
ReplyDeleteEchoing Pinksocks comment. Your words inspire me to write :)
ReplyDeleteRains do make everything around romantic and ever so inspiring...
ReplyDeletevery well written.
I like 'as the rain falls' stanza! Well written, well versed :):)
ReplyDeletebeauty!
ReplyDelete"...You are a muse, a distraction for me,
Watching you, I pass hours, as I sway..."
Just awesome.
hmmmm
ReplyDeletereally liked it :)
though, i wud have more carefully addressed the 'lovely black wall' if i were u.
here it seems u r cajoling as well as threatening ur muse/distraction.
caution: this might confuse it :)
once again, thank you everyone :)
ReplyDelete@satyadarshini: you should write and then share it with me :) thank you!
@punkster: you are awesome! :D
@pinksocks, @saraswathi: please do write and share :)
@adee: the lonely black dot on the wall is very submissive and i take advantage of it all the time :D what can i say, i am a meanie! hehe