मेरा घर जला कर मिला क्या तुमको?
सरहदें यूँ बनाकर, मिला क्या तुमको?
जन्नत जो कहलाया, मेरा यह आशियाँ...
इसे ऐसे तबाह कर मिला क्या तुमको?
चिनार के पत्ते, और शिकारों की तसवीरें...
मेरे ख़्वाब फ़ना कर मिला क्या तुमको?
सदायें फरिश्तों ने भी दी होंगी, कि रुको...
बेवजह यह खता कर, मिला क्या तुमको?
मुझे थी आस कि मिल सकूंगी बीते कल से...
'विती' को मायूस कर, मिला क्या तुमको?
Really nice and well written. I would suggest you also start collecting these poems and going ahead you can publish a small book of poems, it will really do well man!! Best of luck!!
ReplyDeleteWow very nice Viti and very touching too..viti ko mayus kaun kar raha hai..naam batao uskaaaaa grrrr :)
ReplyDeletehmmmm
ReplyDeletelove the emotion... :)
ReplyDeletereally nice!!
nice choice or words & expressions viti :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent theme :)
ReplyDeleteliked a lot :)
ReplyDeletekwab dikhaye tumhare shabdo ne
ReplyDeletelikha tumne sukun mila humko
wah wah
wah...very very beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteJust when I was beginning to know Baavri, I met viti. :)
ReplyDeleteYou write wonderfully well. :)
Thank you everyone :) This one was very spur of the moment. Kashmir is burning, and something is burning in me too.
ReplyDelete@JaggedArrowHead: collecting them :) thank you!
@ani_aset: thanks...aur kar sako to karo kuch kashmir ka :\
@adee: hmmmm :)
@neerja ji: shukriya :)
this was so so beautifully said viti ! :)
ReplyDeletewah...that's beautiful viti :)
ReplyDelete@ladynimue, @renji: thank you :)
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