Tuesday, March 23, 2010

~~~...Baavre khwaab, door kahin...~~~

shaam ki 
narm si god ko 
sirhaana banaakar us roz


maine 
raat ko 
panaah di thi baahon mein


raat si 
hi to hai
tumhaari zulfon ki chhanv


kabhi ulajhte, 
kabhi sulajhte 
baavre khwaab, door kahin...

12 comments:

  1. cheers to you on another set of wonderful poem , will wait for the next one .........

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  2. Jo khwaab door nahin, woh shaayad, itne hii haseen hongein jitni yeh shaam jo ab door biti nahin. :-)

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  3. shades of gulzar :)

    aagosh me khwabo ke
    gum ho jaegi
    viti

    ek anokhi ghazal
    fir likhne aaegi
    viti

    :))

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  4. anyone can fall in love with your poetry

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  5. you must allow us to share on facebook as well

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  6. Agree wid Neerja !! really nice :)

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  7. Agree wid Vishal!! lovin it! :)

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  8. brilliant.. i can totally relate to this one ; )

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  9. this i wud say is d best i've read on ur blog so far :) *hugs*

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  10. thank you all so much for the response! :)

    @rollerr & @ani_aset-thank you and very well written :D

    @neerja ji-again, thank you!

    @adee-that made me so happy :) thank you!

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  11. hey lovely poetry dear...
    Best wishes.. :))

    nything u've written on old friendship..

    @prianca1

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