na rukta hai, na hi jaanta hai ki manzil hai kya...
aaj saath chalo, mere rehnuma, mujhe tum aabaad karo
aagosh mein bhar lo mujhe, dard se aaj tum aazaad karo
ek nakaam si koshish thi tumse juda rehne ki chaaragar
haath thaam lo mera, mere marz ko na yun bezaar karo
duniyadaari se le kar vida yeh carvaan-e-ibaadat chala
logon dua do, koshish hai, ishq ko na sharmsaar karo
fakeer bani firti rahe 'Viti' galiyon mein khwaishon ki
kisi ko bhi de do ilzaam, 'Noor' ko na kusoorwaar karo...
shab bhar zindagi hai, kitni tumhaari, kitni meri?
dum bhar khamoshi hai, kitni tumhaari, kitni meri?
aaj saath chalo, mere rehnuma, mujhe tum aabaad karo
aagosh mein bhar lo mujhe, dard se aaj tum aazaad karo
ek nakaam si koshish thi tumse juda rehne ki chaaragar
haath thaam lo mera, mere marz ko na yun bezaar karo
duniyadaari se le kar vida yeh carvaan-e-ibaadat chala
logon dua do, koshish hai, ishq ko na sharmsaar karo
fakeer bani firti rahe 'Viti' galiyon mein khwaishon ki
kisi ko bhi de do ilzaam, 'Noor' ko na kusoorwaar karo...
Uh! Uffff! That one safely makes it to top class of poetry! Loved it!
ReplyDeletebrilliant viti :) ( tell me if i am wrong, its a thread of multiple thoughts you weaved here)? please remove word verification and start approving comments :D
ReplyDeleteReading yr past few contributions, was just wondering the motivation behind these excellent set of lines !!
ReplyDeletecheers
OHT unfortunately
ReplyDeletefakeer bani firti rahe 'Viti' galiyon mein khwaishon ki
ReplyDeletekisi ko bhi de do ilzaam, 'Noor' ko na kusoorwaar karo.
...kya khoob kaha...baavri sahi naam chuna
logo se keh do dhoonde na shabdon me
khwabon ke ansh
aaine me aks hai aankho se pe lein bus
Really, a super-mast post!
ReplyDeleteTempted me to write such poetry. :)
nice one :)
ReplyDeleteloved d last one d most. hope rest were as good as that :)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot everyone :)
ReplyDelete@ani-you are right..and i will do that [if i remember :D]
@umesh-just random things happening around me
@neerja ji-bahut bahut shukriya :)