Thursday, April 22, 2010

~~~Aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'...~~~


aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
is aashiq ka kya hai qusoor?
aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
jaan jayegi, hai yeh ghuroor!
aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
duniya ka nahi badla dastoor
aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
'Viti' par chhaya ek hi suroor
aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
jagao na ye khwaish huzoor
aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
na karo yun mujhe majboor
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11 comments:

  1. Srushti RaoApril 22, 2010 at 11:29 PM

    aahista, zara aahista 'Noor'
    tumne kiya humein mashgool

    Very well written. Keep it up

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  2. Aditya NandodeApril 22, 2010 at 11:52 PM

    Mix of feelings there, felt it to be mischievous/Sensuous/XXXXX/.........:p

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  3. ChandniApril 23, 2010 at 12:17 AM

    aahista zara aahista huzoor
    ye tumne bahut badhiya likha hai zaroor!!

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  4. Arcopol ChaudhuriApril 23, 2010 at 12:50 AM

    Subhaan allah :)

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  5. mageshApril 23, 2010 at 1:54 AM

    awesome poem again :)
    keep it up

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  6. UnknownApril 23, 2010 at 3:30 AM

    goodie.... short & sweet with lot to tell.

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  7. SatyadarshiniApril 23, 2010 at 7:49 AM

    wow..loved this..!!

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  8. UnknownApril 23, 2010 at 7:54 AM

    Wow.! U have done it again.! NIce job.!

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  9. JyotishkaApril 23, 2010 at 8:21 AM

    Lovely.... you could have rhymed it with Tharoor also since he is all the rage nowadays :)

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  10. shweta Sylvia janiApril 23, 2010 at 9:58 AM

    super baavriji..keep it up

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  11. safarApril 24, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    aachha hai....

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