Thursday, April 8, 2010

~~~...I will follow...~~~

spread out those wings.
knowing you can fly,
why stop now? 
and for whom?


the sky beckons, love.
we can fly together.
or apart.  your call.
i will follow.


chained to the world,
we forget freedom.
what it is like to
feel the wind.


i want to break free.
you helped me,
to remember.
let us leave.


adventuress are waiting,
for us to find them.
a kind of step to
paradises sweet.


fly with me, my Noor!
you want to, i know.
Viti waits there,
where we met.

18 comments:

  1. ..........Another of those, dreamy feelings arousing creation, i so wish i were under an open sky now, with her, and not here, in office.

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  2. Really beautiful!

    Reminds me of a romantic play I read recently named "Viziers of Bassora" by Aurobindo Ghose.

    Keep writing!

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  3. Naice :) liked it..especially the last para :)

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  4. personally speaking.. if i can ever fly.. i wud fly alone.. i wud fly high.. y wait for anyone else?!!

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  5. Loved it! Great poem, and lovely blog name :)

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  6. Superb... I loved those lines...

    "the sky beckons, love.
    we can fly together.
    or apart. your call.
    i will follow."

    too good...waiting for more!

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  7. me too... the lines sathya referred to!

    more like the baavri i know :)

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  8. SO many songs in so few lines....i like the use of word Noor here....

    N

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  9. love it... esp
    "chained to the world,
    we forget freedom.
    what it is like to
    feel the wind."

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  10. thank you so much everyone!

    i love you all :)

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