spread out those wings.
knowing you can fly,
why stop now?
and for whom?
the sky beckons, love.
we can fly together.
or apart. your call.
i will follow.
chained to the world,
we forget freedom.
what it is like to
feel the wind.
i want to break free.
you helped me,
to remember.
let us leave.
adventuress are waiting,
for us to find them.
a kind of step to
paradises sweet.
fly with me, my Noor!
you want to, i know.
Viti waits there,
where we met.
..........Another of those, dreamy feelings arousing creation, i so wish i were under an open sky now, with her, and not here, in office.
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a romantic play I read recently named "Viziers of Bassora" by Aurobindo Ghose.
Keep writing!
Naice :) liked it..especially the last para :)
ReplyDeleteNow who is NOOR?
ReplyDeletepersonally speaking.. if i can ever fly.. i wud fly alone.. i wud fly high.. y wait for anyone else?!!
ReplyDeleteLoved it! Great poem, and lovely blog name :)
ReplyDeleteLoved this one!.. awesome! :)
ReplyDeletegood one :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb... I loved those lines...
ReplyDelete"the sky beckons, love.
we can fly together.
or apart. your call.
i will follow."
too good...waiting for more!
me too... the lines sathya referred to!
ReplyDeletemore like the baavri i know :)
Toru Dutt in making.... :)
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDelete:) Beautiful
ReplyDeleteSO many songs in so few lines....i like the use of word Noor here....
ReplyDeleteN
love it... esp
ReplyDelete"chained to the world,
we forget freedom.
what it is like to
feel the wind."
Beautiful =]
ReplyDeletethank you so much everyone!
ReplyDeletei love you all :)
hmm...
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