mujh baavri ko ab yahan kaun sambhaale
aaja 'Noor' kabhi mujhe tu gale se lagaa le
sadak kinaare padi khwaishein meri, dekh
mohabbat ka meri mujhe kuch to silaa de
sabr ki intehaa to kab ki peeche reh gayii
sukoon bhi kho gaya mera, usse milaa de
tooti si 'Viti,' lekin abhi tamanna hai zinda
kuch der saath chal, thodi der panaah de
Tooti si viti!
ReplyDeleteI loved the "Tooti si viti" part ... used your name perfectly to the posture of climax.. great going!
ReplyDeleteexpresses the emotions beautifully
ReplyDeleteImpressive miss. very.
ReplyDeleteAshu
jo roshan rahe
ReplyDeletejo roshan rakhe
woh noor hi to hai
jo viti ko baavri rakhe
Insure your life.
ReplyDeleteClaim your life.
Your words are better than emotions.
The emotions need to reclaim their lives.
[emotions are #fail as compared to your words. Kya likha hai! Nice composition. Kaun se chhand evam alankar upyog kiye hain tumne!]
another of such beautiful piece! Good one.
ReplyDeletesubhan-allah
ReplyDeleteaap sab ka shukriya! :D
ReplyDelete@adee: <3