Tuesday, April 27, 2010

~~~...Sarsari nigaah hi bhali hai...~~~


darakht-e-daraar ki si haalat ho chali hai
nacheez ko ek sarsari nigaah hi bhali hai

aab-o-hawa se na hove guzaara ikhlaas
kami dilsoz ik khanakte saaz ki khali hai

'Noor' tu aashnaa, hai tu kaafir mere liye 
na chahke bhi rooh-e-'Viti' yun hi dhali hai

darakht-e-darrar=tree that grows out of a crack in the pavement/wall
ikhlaas=love/selfless worship
dilsoz=touching/passionate
aashna=friend/lover
kaafir=infidel/sweetheart
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15 comments:

  1. Shakti_ShettyApril 27, 2010 at 4:29 PM

    Yeah, i truly appreciate you writing the meaning of those difficult lafz/alfaaz out there... good work... keep writing.

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  2. Aditya NandodeApril 27, 2010 at 9:53 PM

    Kafir = infidel is too harsh! But loved the words strung together! Bravo!

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  3. delhidreamsApril 27, 2010 at 10:45 PM

    hmmm
    the poetess is growing
    both in terms of vocabulary n wisdom of love :)

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  4. Arti HonraoApril 27, 2010 at 11:09 PM

    This one was difficult to understand in first reading. Thanks for the meaning of the words at the end of the post. That really helped.

    Nicely written :)


    GBU
    Arti

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  5. ani_asetApril 27, 2010 at 11:12 PM

    kafir sounds a bit strong viti..but loved it :)

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  6. IreApril 27, 2010 at 11:46 PM

    I started out by wanting to write a lot about your writing...but I guess I am falling short of words. :)

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  7. shweta Sylvia janiApril 27, 2010 at 11:48 PM

    Loved it..loved the meaning of 'darakht-e-daraar' super, girl. Great.

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  8. SurubhiApril 28, 2010 at 12:40 AM

    Beautiful..... :)

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  9. AnonymousApril 28, 2010 at 1:36 AM

    thank god..u gave the meanings :P use of those special words has made it sound more beautiful :)

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  10. RoohApril 28, 2010 at 1:59 AM

    i have just started reading ur blog... do u really write this... it awesome...

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  11. ChandniApril 28, 2010 at 3:44 AM

    Beautifully written!!

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  12. Himanshu BhagatApril 28, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    fallen in love??? :)
    Well written!

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  13. baavrivitiApril 28, 2010 at 6:00 PM

    thank you so much :)

    @nidhi-yes i did write it :) btw, i love your blog!

    @himanshu-yes, of course...many times :)

    and as for kaafir being too harsh..hmm..thats how i felt :)

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  14. dupreeApril 29, 2010 at 11:40 AM

    great work..thoughts nicely woven into words..

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  15. baavrivitiMay 12, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    thank you :)

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