Tuesday, May 18, 2010

~~~...फर्क बेवफा और हरजाई में…~~~


बिखरी सी लट कहीं
बादलों की गहराई में
मासूमियत अंगड़ाई की
है बच्चों की जम्हाई में
कभी नज़रें चुराना तेरा
ढ़लते सूरज की रुसवाई में
दिखाई देती हैं तेरी आँखें
हर मंज़र की परछाई में
‘नूर,’ मिलें तो सोचना कभी
फर्क बेवफा और हरजाई में…

16 comments:

  1. :) beautiful as always... I loved the mood of the post...

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  2. Awesome...!!!! i like ur poems... keep it up dear..

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  3. Yes! as harshita says! Beautiful as always!

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  4. Loved it truely :) farak bewafa aur harjaayi mein.. Thin line.. :)

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  5. Beautiful :)especially that 'masumiyaath angdaayi ' :)

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  6. Lovely post. It touches you where poetry should. Awesome.

    mesmerizing choice of words..

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  7. +1 with harshita n aditya
    "Beautiful as always"

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  8. bahut khubsurat rachna
    http://bejubankalam.blogspot.com/
    http://speakingconscience.blogspot.com/

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  9. thanks a lot everyone! :)

    @nikita: we're mutual fans then ;)

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  10. Bahut badhiya viti! aise hi likhte rehna!

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  11. :) quite cheeky i must say
    mushkil to yahi hai ke jo bewafa hai wohi apna hai aur wohi harjai bhi :)

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  12. It is like - you're writing on behalf of me. If I can, I'll write the same words, same expressions. Every word of this post is precious. I read again and again, and every time a new but unknown feeling just mesmerize me. Thanks.

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  13. thanks :)

    @chandni ji: keep reading, and i will keep writing :)

    @adee: so true..

    @asim: i am happy that you could identify. thank you!

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