Tuesday, May 18, 2010

~~~...फर्क बेवफा और हरजाई में…~~~


बिखरी सी लट कहीं
बादलों की गहराई में
मासूमियत अंगड़ाई की
है बच्चों की जम्हाई में
कभी नज़रें चुराना तेरा
ढ़लते सूरज की रुसवाई में
दिखाई देती हैं तेरी आँखें
हर मंज़र की परछाई में
‘नूर,’ मिलें तो सोचना कभी
फर्क बेवफा और हरजाई में…
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16 comments:

  1. MeMay 18, 2010 at 1:51 AM

    :) beautiful as always... I loved the mood of the post...

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  2. * મારી રચના *May 18, 2010 at 1:59 AM

    Awesome...!!!! i like ur poems... keep it up dear..

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  3. Aditya NandodeMay 18, 2010 at 2:04 AM

    Yes! as harshita says! Beautiful as always!

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  4. RichaMay 18, 2010 at 2:07 AM

    Loved it truely :) farak bewafa aur harjaayi mein.. Thin line.. :)

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  5. AnonymousMay 18, 2010 at 2:21 AM

    Beautiful :)especially that 'masumiyaath angdaayi ' :)

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  6. Freaky GeniousMay 18, 2010 at 2:24 AM

    Lovely post. It touches you where poetry should. Awesome.

    mesmerizing choice of words..

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  7. mageshMay 18, 2010 at 2:30 AM

    +1 with harshita n aditya
    "Beautiful as always"

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  8. IreMay 18, 2010 at 3:16 AM

    You have got a fan in me! :)

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  9. Srushti RaoMay 18, 2010 at 4:00 AM

    Whoa!!! Awesome! Wow!

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  10. ani_asetMay 20, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    i liked this one viti :)

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  11. arpitMay 21, 2010 at 12:50 AM

    bahut khubsurat rachna
    http://bejubankalam.blogspot.com/
    http://speakingconscience.blogspot.com/

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  12. baavrivitiMay 23, 2010 at 5:13 PM

    thanks a lot everyone! :)

    @nikita: we're mutual fans then ;)

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  13. ChandniMay 23, 2010 at 8:03 PM

    Bahut badhiya viti! aise hi likhte rehna!

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  14. delhidreamsMay 26, 2010 at 10:40 AM

    :) quite cheeky i must say
    mushkil to yahi hai ke jo bewafa hai wohi apna hai aur wohi harjai bhi :)

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  15. Asim BandoMay 28, 2010 at 12:16 PM

    It is like - you're writing on behalf of me. If I can, I'll write the same words, same expressions. Every word of this post is precious. I read again and again, and every time a new but unknown feeling just mesmerize me. Thanks.

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  16. baavrivitiJune 17, 2010 at 6:20 PM

    thanks :)

    @chandni ji: keep reading, and i will keep writing :)

    @adee: so true..

    @asim: i am happy that you could identify. thank you!

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