आसमान पर चलो
कुछ लिखते हैं आज
ख्वाइशों की
स्याही से हम...
थोडा तुम लिखना
थोडा मैं लिखूंगी
शायद कुछ बातें
सुलझा लेंगे...
दे सकेंगे कुछ
ख़्वाबों को शकल
उड़ते पंछियों से
भी करेंगे गुफ्तगू...
बावरे कुछ इरादे
'विती' के हैं यह
इनायत लेकिन
है यह 'नूर' की...
आसमान पर चलो
कुछ लिखते हैं आज...
wow...that sounds sweet :) the flow was amazing :)
ReplyDeleteLikhne main maahir ho aap, padhke dil gadh gadh hogayaa. Aap likhte itne achche ho, sayad likhwane ke liye aasmaan kavi zameen chhulega. U r brilliant VITI, : Amaresh Rath
ReplyDeleteSombre and poetic :)
ReplyDeletenice thought viti :) power of dreams
ReplyDeletevery nice:) keep up the gr8 work:)
ReplyDeletebrilliant.
ReplyDelete'de sakenge kuch khwabon ko shakal'
that sums it all.
you should really consider being a lyricist.
keep em coming :)
goodie...
ReplyDelete"थोडा तुम लिखना
थोडा मैं लिखूंगी
शायद कुछ बातें
सुलझा लेंगे..." wah!
As Apoyando says: Somber and Poetic! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteBahut sundar...it will make for a good song!
ReplyDeleteu really wanna fly fly fly..don't u? Liked it! :)
ReplyDeletejust noticed. when you say 'noor' are you referring to some one or is it just noor ?
ReplyDeletelol, just wondering since most of your poems have 'noor' in it.
कुछ लिखतें हैं आज - मासूम लब्जो में दिल की कहानी !
ReplyDeletewah....really nice :)
ReplyDeleteTHE BEST 1 OF YOURS
ReplyDeletethanks a lot everyone :)
ReplyDelete@rohyt: its both..a person and the literal meaning. in my works, there is a relationship between 'Viti' and 'Noor' that has been evolving over time.
nice work keep it up
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thanks arpit!
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