~~~Baavre se mann ki dekho baavri hain baatein~~~
@Vits - awesome work girl .. reminds me of "I dont wanna close my eyes.. i dont wanna fall asleep coz i miss you baby and dont wanna miss a thing" ; )
To listen to Your voice, some sleep i trade...beautiful Vitiji
Simple yet beautiful.. Love this.
short and sweet... love it :)
I am afraid which sleep you are referring to.trust me, when the castles vanish and the full moon breaks into pieces , the final goodbye seems never fading.
simple poetry...expressing volumes...beautiful!
Like the rhyming..and understand the pain..good one!!
respect.i wish i could write such stuff.for now, i'll be inspired ;)
Lovely...not many can say alot in a few words. You have a gift.
Viti!Awesome work again! too good! loved it! :) Will share it right away on twitter! Your poems are worth a mention in my blog too! will write about them sometime! Great going! Keep me informed with newer posts o yours! Love them!Cheers and keep up the good work!Sanjay
omg..thank you so much everyone! i love the response!@vishi2max: yes it kinda does :D@anirban: i disagree. takes time for sure, but it happens eventually.@rohyt: looking fwd to reading your work :)@sanjay: thank you! will keep you updated!