I am afraid which sleep you are referring to. trust me, when the castles vanish and the full moon breaks into pieces , the final goodbye seems never fading.
Awesome work again! too good! loved it! :) Will share it right away on twitter! Your poems are worth a mention in my blog too! will write about them sometime! Great going! Keep me informed with newer posts o yours! Love them!
@Vits - awesome work girl .. reminds me of
ReplyDelete"I dont wanna close my eyes.. i dont wanna fall asleep coz i miss you baby and dont wanna miss a thing" ; )
To listen to Your voice, some sleep i trade...beautiful Vitiji
ReplyDeleteSimple yet beautiful.. Love this.
ReplyDeleteshort and sweet...
ReplyDeletelove it :)
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteI am afraid which sleep you are referring to.
ReplyDeletetrust me, when the castles vanish and the full moon breaks into pieces , the final goodbye seems never fading.
simple poetry...expressing volumes...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLike the rhyming..and understand the pain..good one!!
ReplyDeletepoetry :)
ReplyDeleterespect.
ReplyDeletei wish i could write such stuff.
for now, i'll be inspired ;)
Lovely...not many can say alot in a few words. You have a gift.
ReplyDeleteViti!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work again! too good! loved it! :) Will share it right away on twitter! Your poems are worth a mention in my blog too! will write about them sometime! Great going! Keep me informed with newer posts o yours! Love them!
Cheers and keep up the good work!
Sanjay
beautiful..... :)
ReplyDeleteomg..thank you so much everyone! i love the response!
ReplyDelete@vishi2max: yes it kinda does :D
@anirban: i disagree. takes time for sure, but it happens eventually.
@rohyt: looking fwd to reading your work :)
@sanjay: thank you! will keep you updated!