Sunday, May 23, 2010

~~~...हिस्सों में बंटी ज़िन्दगी...~~~

कल रात बरस गयीं बूँदें |
कुछ आँखों से और कुछ
बाहर बादलों से गिरीं |


बरसने का सबब पूछा,
खामोश रहीं, टपक गयीं |
चुप्पी उनकी गूंजती है |


तुम्हारी ख़ामोशी, 'नूर'
यूँही मुझे तरसाती है |
ज़हन में समा जाती है |


मैं क्यूँ ना दूर जाऊं तुमसे?
क्यूँ ना मैं आजमाओं तुम्हें?
हक़ कुछ है मेरा भी, शायद |


ना छोड़ना मुमकिन 'विती'
ना ही रहना उसके साथ,
हिस्सों में बंटी ज़िन्दगी |

17 comments:

  1. wahh bahut hi khubsurat!! u write really well viti!

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  2. Nice one...
    Its really heart touching...

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  3. Dil ko chhulenewali dumm hai ishmey! Kavi kisi nek dil ki aankhon se aansu nagire .

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  4. very touching.
    i've been inspired to the extent that im going to try and write something myself.
    lol
    lets see how that works out.

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  5. हिस्सों में बंटी ज़िन्दगी | .. but a complete poem in its sense....i felt it strong mainly becuz of 4th stanza..overall nicely compiled..

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  6. ना छोड़ना मुमकिन 'विती'
    ना ही रहना उसके साथ,
    हिस्सों में बंटी ज़िन्दगी |

    aapki kitab kab prakashit ho rahi hai madame

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  7. Took me 15 minutes to read due to my poor Hindi reading skills but it was worth the time! :)

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  8. "मैं क्यूँ ना दूर जाऊं तुमसे?
    क्यूँ ना मैं आजमाओं तुम्हें?
    हक़ कुछ है मेरा भी, शायद |"

    love these lines......great work....:)

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  9. Very good Viti! Keep up the good work:)

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  10. its beautiful, all written quotes are wonderful.

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  11. Hisson main hai zindagi! Nice thought!

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  12. u started with something and then took us to somewhere completely different...from a sadness outside to a sorrow within...hmmm :)

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  13. thank you so much everyone :)

    @rohyt: let me know when you do write something :)

    @neerja ji: kya aap bhi :D kitaab mein chhapne jitna achcha nahi lag raha :)

    @harry jerry: thanks for the effort :D

    @adee: true. that poem was not supposed to go this way but i let it flow :)

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  14. Heya !!
    nice piece f writin'
    darin' 2 post a reponse:

    boondon ke barasne ka sabab mat poochh viti,
    chaahe ankhon se tapke ya baadalon se giren
    bas baras jaana hi boondon ki fitrat hai,
    noor chahe jitna bhaage door viti se
    viti jitna bhi azmaaye apne noor ko
    ik-doosre ko samaana hi dono ki jannat hai..

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  15. @nikita: the feeling is mutual. i thought the same when i read your blog.

    @gurshabadjeet: thank you...and the response...well...

    noor-e-ilaahi to mere paas hai baitha kab se
    kami to doosre noor ki hai jo hai to viti ka
    par milne se katraata hai, sataata hai, aur
    barasne ke bahaane waqt bewaqt tadpaata hai...

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