Thursday, June 17, 2010

~~~...हाथों में हाथ हो...~~~

हाथों में हाथ हो, हाँ यह आस तो है
तेरे संग हर रात हो, एक प्यास तो है


रंगों में घुली, बरसात में कुछ धुली सी
यादें हैं, हाँ तुम नहीं हो, एहसास तो है


'विती' की बातों को सुनो तो पता चले 
ज़िन्दगी में 'नूर' की जगह ख़ास तो है...

15 comments:

  1. milna naseeb ho na ho tujhse
    khwabon me hardam paas to hai ..


    sorry fr these lines .. cud not stop myself from wndering abt this :) lovely lines !!

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  2. Kya baat hai...bahut khoobsurat ahsaas hai! :)

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  3. You hold the same magic in Hindi... just like you do in English. Impressive.

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  4. ..i so wanted to read a few more lines!! #Noice

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  5. Beautiful post..especially those starting lines :)

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  6. Amazing! And even more amazing is that Viti and Nuur always find a place in ur poetry!

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  7. hmmm
    short n sweet
    though wud hav loved if u had written more :)

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  8. Batati nahi viti par,
    Kuch baat to hai,
    Haan haan kuch khaas to hai :D

    Liked this short and sweet one :D

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  9. Wow,nice, one of the best read posts so far.

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  10. Short and meaningful as always

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  11. thank you everyone :)

    @ladynimue: thanks for the line :)

    @MMS, @adee: would have written more if there was anything else to write :D

    @silentlyexpress: :D thank you!

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