Wednesday, June 30, 2010

~~~...kya farak padta hai...~~~

dabi aawaaz mein mera naam leke bas ek baar kaha hota ki pyaar hai mujhe bhi tumse...


phir kya aarzoo aur kya khwaishein...kya tamanna aur kya guftagu...

             par afsaana-e-baavri thehra...itni aasani se kaise nipte

'noor' ki bhi khwaishein hain jinmein kahin 'viti' ka zikr nahi






chahat-e-viti rahe latakti, kya farak padta hai
  sach mein, kya farak padta hai
  ek aur kissa jud jayega daastaanon ki pherist mein





kuch aur log padh lenge aur muskura denge
  khamosh aahon ki sureeli si sadayen sunkar





aakhir kitni raaton ki neend ganvaye viti intezaar mein
  ki kisi din to...

dabi aawaaz mein mera naam leke bas ek baar kahogi tum ki pyaar hai mujhe bhi tumse...

7 comments:

  1. you inspire me every single time i read you !!! awesome .. brilliant.. loved the line :

    "par afsaana-e-baavri thehra...itni aasani se kaise nipte"

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  2. Very nice... loved the way u have depict the feelings...

    bahaane aur bhi hote jo zindagi jeene ke liye, Magar maksad pura na huva tho jeene ka maaza kya..

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  3. very nice viti loved it :)

    keh to doon dabi awaaz me
    par ehsaas bhi na ho to
    kehne se
    kya farak padta hai :)

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  4. really really like it.....
    "chahat-e-viti rahe latakti, kya farak padta hai
    sach mein, kya farak padta hai
    ek aur kissa jud jayega daastaanon ki pherist mein"

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  5. thank you everyone :)

    @ladynimue: you inspire me too :)

    @nabeel: sahi kaha, maza kya hai? ;)

    @ani_aset: keh diya usne aur ehsaas bhi hai ;)

    @rashi: :)

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