Thursday, June 24, 2010

~~~...सांझ ढलते अपने घर चलीं...~~~

साहिल में दिखीं कुछ सिलवटें
बढ़कर बवंडर जो बन चलीं...


वोह तो पाक जिंदगियां ठहरीं,
सारी रस्मों से हटकर चलीं...


मतवाले और परवाने थे ही सब
शमा की फरयादें बेअसर चलीं...


रूह की प्यास को मिटाना चाहा 
सहराओं की चाहतें बेखबर चलीं...


'विती' और 'नूर' की कहानियां 
कई ज़ुबानों पर बेधड़क चलीं...


मिले ठिकाने बहुत यादों को, पर
सांझ ढलते अपने घर चलीं...

11 comments:

  1. विती एक हवा का झौँका - बेधड़क ऊड़ी अपने मंन्जिल् कि और्

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  2. Nice I liked it. I think you should try and publish a small booklet kind of thing of all your short poems

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  3. waah...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai..

    hoth jalte hai hamare muskurane se
    phir bhi koi shikwa nahi jamene se

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  4. शब्द विहीन! :)

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  5. Had difficulty understanding a few words. Got a friend to translate. She said your language was simply soulful :)

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  6. Awesome..!!! :)*Thumbs Up* 4 ur poem dear.. keep it up

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  7. some of these couplets are by far your best...simple and profound :)

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  8. bahut bahut shukriya sabhi ka :)

    @jaggedarrowhead: i have a lot to improve :D

    @abhijeet: thank your friend from my side :)

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