Thursday, June 24, 2010

~~~...सांझ ढलते अपने घर चलीं...~~~

साहिल में दिखीं कुछ सिलवटें
बढ़कर बवंडर जो बन चलीं...


वोह तो पाक जिंदगियां ठहरीं,
सारी रस्मों से हटकर चलीं...


मतवाले और परवाने थे ही सब
शमा की फरयादें बेअसर चलीं...


रूह की प्यास को मिटाना चाहा 
सहराओं की चाहतें बेखबर चलीं...


'विती' और 'नूर' की कहानियां 
कई ज़ुबानों पर बेधड़क चलीं...


मिले ठिकाने बहुत यादों को, पर
सांझ ढलते अपने घर चलीं...
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11 comments:

  1. AmareshJune 24, 2010 at 7:03 PM

    विती एक हवा का झौँका - बेधड़क ऊड़ी अपने मंन्जिल् कि और्

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  2. Prerna MunshiJune 24, 2010 at 9:12 PM

    Very nice Viti! :):)

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  3. JaggedArrowHeadJune 24, 2010 at 10:09 PM

    Nice I liked it. I think you should try and publish a small booklet kind of thing of all your short poems

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  4. winniethepoohiJune 25, 2010 at 12:46 AM

    Awesome!!!

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  5. Nabeel NJune 25, 2010 at 4:07 AM

    waah...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai..

    hoth jalte hai hamare muskurane se
    phir bhi koi shikwa nahi jamene se

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  6. AnonymousJune 25, 2010 at 5:49 AM

    बहुत सुंदर

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  7. Ghumakkar PunitJune 25, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    शब्द विहीन! :)

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  8. UnknownJune 25, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    Had difficulty understanding a few words. Got a friend to translate. She said your language was simply soulful :)

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  9. * મારી રચના *June 25, 2010 at 11:54 PM

    Awesome..!!! :)*Thumbs Up* 4 ur poem dear.. keep it up

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  10. delhidreamsJune 26, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    some of these couplets are by far your best...simple and profound :)

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  11. baavrivitiJune 30, 2010 at 5:36 PM

    bahut bahut shukriya sabhi ka :)

    @jaggedarrowhead: i have a lot to improve :D

    @abhijeet: thank your friend from my side :)

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