Friday, March 19, 2010

~~~...Kitni tumhaari, kitni meri...~~~

kaisi deewangi us parinde ki jo udta hi chala jaaye?  
na rukta hai, na hi jaanta hai ki manzil hai kya...



shab bhar zindagi hai,  kitni tumhaari, kitni meri?
dum bhar khamoshi hai, kitni tumhaari, kitni meri?



aaj saath chalo, mere rehnuma, mujhe tum aabaad karo
aagosh mein bhar lo mujhe, dard se aaj tum aazaad karo


ek nakaam si koshish thi tumse juda rehne ki chaaragar
haath thaam lo mera, mere marz ko na yun bezaar karo


duniyadaari se le kar vida yeh carvaan-e-ibaadat chala
logon dua do, koshish hai, ishq ko na sharmsaar karo


fakeer bani firti rahe 'Viti' galiyon mein khwaishon ki
kisi ko bhi de do ilzaam, 'Noor' ko na kusoorwaar karo...

9 comments:

  1. Uh! Uffff! That one safely makes it to top class of poetry! Loved it!

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  2. brilliant viti :) ( tell me if i am wrong, its a thread of multiple thoughts you weaved here)? please remove word verification and start approving comments :D

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  3. Reading yr past few contributions, was just wondering the motivation behind these excellent set of lines !!
    cheers

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  4. fakeer bani firti rahe 'Viti' galiyon mein khwaishon ki
    kisi ko bhi de do ilzaam, 'Noor' ko na kusoorwaar karo.
    ...kya khoob kaha...baavri sahi naam chuna
    logo se keh do dhoonde na shabdon me
    khwabon ke ansh
    aaine me aks hai aankho se pe lein bus

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  5. Really, a super-mast post!
    Tempted me to write such poetry. :)

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  6. loved d last one d most. hope rest were as good as that :)

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  7. thanks a lot everyone :)

    @ani-you are right..and i will do that [if i remember :D]

    @umesh-just random things happening around me

    @neerja ji-bahut bahut shukriya :)

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