Friday, April 16, 2010

~~~...Thodi der panaah de...~~~

mujh baavri ko ab yahan kaun sambhaale
aaja 'Noor' kabhi mujhe tu gale se lagaa le

sadak kinaare padi khwaishein meri, dekh
mohabbat ka meri mujhe kuch to silaa de

sabr ki intehaa to kab ki peeche reh gayii
sukoon bhi kho gaya mera, usse milaa de

tooti si 'Viti,' lekin abhi tamanna hai zinda
kuch der saath chal, thodi der panaah de

9 comments:

  1. I loved the "Tooti si viti" part ... used your name perfectly to the posture of climax.. great going!

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  2. expresses the emotions beautifully

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  3. Impressive miss. very.

    Ashu

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  4. jo roshan rahe
    jo roshan rakhe

    woh noor hi to hai
    jo viti ko baavri rakhe

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  5. Insure your life.
    Claim your life.
    Your words are better than emotions.
    The emotions need to reclaim their lives.
    [emotions are #fail as compared to your words. Kya likha hai! Nice composition. Kaun se chhand evam alankar upyog kiye hain tumne!]

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  6. another of such beautiful piece! Good one.

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  7. aap sab ka shukriya! :D

    @adee: <3

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