Sunday, October 10, 2010

Ghost

You'll never see me,

Though I've always been here.

Your eyes pierce my flesh,

Past the person that's real.

Others you love,

You hold, want to feel,

And I'm just a ghost,

Unloving, unreal.
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7 comments:

  1. ani_asetOctober 10, 2010 at 9:48 PM

    nice post gilehri :) i like these short poems a lot..and i like what you have left unsaid ;D

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  2. NavjotOctober 10, 2010 at 9:57 PM

    Lovely. I like how so few words have been used to express so much! Would love to read some more by this guest poet(ess) :)

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  3. MeOctober 10, 2010 at 10:03 PM

    A beautiful post...

    Hope to read some more of your work.

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  4. Manpreet BediOctober 10, 2010 at 10:04 PM

    awesome indeed, keep up the good work. :)

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  5. AnonymousOctober 10, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    So much said in few words & me reading again & again, gud keep it up.

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  6. BillOctober 12, 2010 at 11:08 PM

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  7. baavrivitiNovember 6, 2010 at 5:43 PM

    Thank you everyone :)

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