Independence and dignity,
Two things I adore, I apply.
I will give them up for you.
I won't get a chance though.
You are self-sufficient, free
With no needs, no desires.
Here I am dying for a glance.
There you are, so beautiful,
As ever. Out of reach, range.
I will never give up. Never.
Nothing wrong in loving.
Without limits or deliberation.
"A rose is a rose is a rose."
You are you. I am me.
Nothing will change. Ever.
I cud so very well relate to it in a weird way!
ReplyDeleteNice!!!
#ilikethis
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ReplyDeletejust happened to stumble upon your blog...loved this poem...it has a simple lovely flow...wish you all the very best...
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This is very very sweetly done..i'll love you no matter what :) very well done..i like the style viti..something i use more often too :)
ReplyDeleteA cute poem!!
ReplyDeletebut, pls dont mind- i cant comment anything more on it...bcoz, am still an infant in matters of poems n all dat..
may be, I may learn from you. =)
Good Luck!! :)
@mMS: thanks a lot!
ReplyDelete@mou: i am glad you liked it :) thank you and please do keep coming back :)
@ani_aset: thank you so much! lemme see some of your work too :)
@sushant: thanks!
@bhumish: thanks a lot :)