ek katra roshni khud ko chhipati nikal aati hai
uske aanchal mein khelne ka mann karta hai
saundhi saundhi si ik
mehak pehli baarish ke baad, jaise ghhul jaati hai
fiza mein, mujhko bhi kho jane ka mann karta hai
khilti kali kholti hai jab
parat-dar-parat khud ko, saare jahaan ko bhati hai
duniya ke samne 'Viti' ko aane ka mann karta hai
chamakti shabnam ho
pankhudiyon par phoolon ki, 'Noor' sa ik laati hai
choom kar uski mithas pi jane ka mann karta hai
Lovely! Keep em coming. I like the 3rd verse the most though :)
ReplyDeleteWow! Well written! Short and sweet! :)
ReplyDeleteBas iss kavita ko padte reh jaoo
aisa jane kyun "mann karta hai"
Cheers
Sanjay
Bahut khoob!! truly awesome Viti!!
ReplyDeleteloved the way you covered a lot of things in such a short meter.... keep up the good work. Keep writing.. just one doubt.. wat is meant by "Viti"?
ReplyDeleteghane baadlo se
ReplyDeletepehli barish ki fuhar me har boond ko
apne haath se choone ka man karta hai :P
shabaash kya likha hai keep it up Viti(witty) :)
amazing work!:)awesome!
ReplyDelete<333 it! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sweetie
ReplyDeleteKeep Writing
Regards
Harshita
thank you everyone yet again for the awesome response :D
ReplyDelete@sanjay: khoob likha hai aur shukriya :)
@lost_scotoma: 'viti' is my pen name, or takhallus as it is known in urdu :)
@ani_aset: i love your verse too :D thanks!