Tuesday, February 23, 2010

~~~...the muse...~~~

the last cut heals.
i sit and wait for
the miracle.

abandoned sighs
and a rose thorn.
the muse.

numbness of mind
is a cure within
the madness.
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12 comments:

  1. ani_asetFebruary 23, 2010 at 9:31 PM

    lovely viti..just love the different styles that you write in..and what thoughts..loved it :)

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  2. SAFebruary 23, 2010 at 9:37 PM

    Good one again! Wow! How do you do this with both hindi and english! Equally lovely in both the languages. Keep posting! Will be waiting for the next one. This one needs a definite tweet. Will share!

    Well written! Well done. :)

    Cheers
    Sanjay

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  3. Srushti RaoFebruary 23, 2010 at 9:39 PM

    Too good.

    Keep it up :)

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  4. baavrivitiFebruary 23, 2010 at 10:12 PM

    thank you all! <3 :)

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  5. Nilesh ParabFebruary 24, 2010 at 12:13 AM

    Nice one again! It's got feel and depth.

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  6. neerjaFebruary 24, 2010 at 1:40 AM

    abandoned sighs..
    ...
    sighhhh

    well written well conveyed

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  7. RichaFebruary 24, 2010 at 4:18 AM

    u do it everytime :) \m/ :)

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  8. StephenFebruary 25, 2010 at 4:25 AM

    lovely :D ur really good :D keep them coming!

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  9. PallavMarch 11, 2010 at 10:50 AM

    Madness is the cure!

    N

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  10. baavrivitiMarch 12, 2010 at 7:02 PM

    thank you all for reading and the appreciation :)

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  11. RashiMarch 19, 2010 at 1:31 PM

    "numbness of a mind is a cure within"--wow ...cldnt hv put it better!!

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  12. Aditya NandodeJuly 3, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    That line can explain lot of things! #awesome!

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