Monday, February 8, 2010

~~~...insane i am/i am insane...~~~

four doors and a window.
no walls, no floor.
bed on the roof.
my house; the city of nothing.
light comes and goes.
when 'noor' shines,
darkness prevails.

insane i am
i am insane

birds flying backwards.
there, green hued sky
thats your revenge
for the days of the moon?
an inch of kohl black ice.
control loses balance
eyes open wide.

insane i am
i am insane

courage lost in jungle.
hoopoe hoops hoopla.
happy hoopla hoopoe?
gone before left. left?
autumn sun muses now
gold shines silver here.
'viti' love stamps itself.

insane i am
i am insane
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12 comments:

  1. Avinash ShahriFebruary 8, 2010 at 4:47 PM

    Lovely! Original, free and such a pleasant read! Keep writing
    Avinash

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  2. Simply PoetFebruary 8, 2010 at 4:51 PM

    It's a bit abstract..but nice..

    Regards,
    www.simplypoet.com
    Team SimplyPoet

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  3. @vermegaFebruary 8, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    wow. u write so well.
    Megha

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  4. Pragya ModiFebruary 8, 2010 at 7:25 PM

    nice poem!! first time am reading your poem and so well written it is...
    really glad to meet you through twitter :)
    keep writing!

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  5. HarshaFebruary 8, 2010 at 8:08 PM

    when 'noor' shines, Love this line.
    nice one, expressions are so true yet the words are tiny.

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  6. AnuragFebruary 8, 2010 at 8:27 PM

    Insanely Great....

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  7. Shakti_ShettyFebruary 9, 2010 at 12:23 AM

    beautiful use of words... loved it!.. keep writing.

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  8. Luv_hoFebruary 9, 2010 at 1:30 AM

    Me likes! :)

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  9. delhidreamsFebruary 9, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    hahaha
    love makes us all insane
    but then when was sanity sane?

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  10. AbhiFebruary 10, 2010 at 12:41 PM

    insane i am insane....

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  11. Srushti RaoFebruary 10, 2010 at 7:44 PM

    Very nicely written. Loved it.

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  12. baavrivitiFebruary 10, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    thanks a lot everyone! i appreciate the response...

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