Sunday, February 14, 2010

~~~...Dil uska pighalta nahi hai...~~~

तेरे नींद गंवाने से देख उसे यूँ दर्द होता नहीं है
लाख चाहे तू लेकिन चैन वो तो खोता नहीं है

अब तड़पने का सबब बन चुका है जो 'विती'
मुहब्बत जताके अब्र-ऐ-सुकून बरसता नहीं है


गैर है वो हो कर भी तेरा अपना, तेरा वो 'नूर'
मानता है तुझे बहुत, तुझसे मगर जुड़ता नहीं है 


तेरे इश्क में शायद नहीं तपिश ज्यादा मेरी जान
मोम का हो कर भी दिल उसका पिघलता नहीं है


बावरी हो जाए तू, उल्फत में ऐसी दीवानी है
हज़ारों ख्वाइशों से भरा दिल संभलता नहीं है 

12 comments:

  1. awww nice one :) seriously! really good :)

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  2. wah wah...
    wah wah...

    btw, tell me something- is that subtle 'viti' your signature style?

    awesomely shakyyy... liked it.

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  3. loved it viti..superb writing :) yaar.i loved the style of narration too :)..also love the use of 'viti' in your poems

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  4. dil pighalein to saanchon mein dhal jaate hain
    ubar nahi paate ishq ki qaid se
    apne aahon mein itni tapish rakh 'viti'
    na to 'noor' pighle, na patthar hi rahe

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  5. @stephen, chandni, and simply poet: thanks a lot you all :)

    @desininja: 'Viti' is my signature, yep, also known as takhallus in urdu..been using it for a while, and it is usually couple with the use of 'Noor'

    @ani: i am so happy that you read all of my stuff :) thanks a lot for all the comments and appreciation! keeps me going :)

    @adee: sighh...if only i could write as well as you :)

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  6. usme jasba nahi
    teri mauhbat ki tapish sehne ka,
    teri mauhbat to aaj ka dariya
    usme jasba nahi doob ke jane ka :)

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  7. Bedaade ishq se nahin darte magar Asad...
    Jis dil pe naaz thaa mujhe woh dil nahin raha.
    Hum kahaan ke danaa the, kis hunar mein yakta the...
    Be sabab hua Ghalib dushman aasmaan apna.
    very well written dear..keep writing

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  8. Awesome post.

    Meri jaan yeh jo justaju hai teri ulfat ko paane ki, teri deewangi tujhe dilayegi,
    usko abhi kadar nahi teri, par ruk ja, humne ulfat ke jalwe bhi kayi dekhe hai...

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  9. @meeta: shukriya :D

    @harshita: dushman aasmaan apna...haha...loved it...and thank you :)

    @Srushti: ab kya kahun main aapse...

    ki yun to jalwe humne bhi dekh liye mohabbat ke
    jalwagar magar 'Noor' sa dekhne ki cheez hai... ;)

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