Monday, February 8, 2010

~~~...insane i am/i am insane...~~~

four doors and a window.
no walls, no floor.
bed on the roof.
my house; the city of nothing.
light comes and goes.
when 'noor' shines,
darkness prevails.

insane i am
i am insane

birds flying backwards.
there, green hued sky
thats your revenge
for the days of the moon?
an inch of kohl black ice.
control loses balance
eyes open wide.

insane i am
i am insane

courage lost in jungle.
hoopoe hoops hoopla.
happy hoopla hoopoe?
gone before left. left?
autumn sun muses now
gold shines silver here.
'viti' love stamps itself.

insane i am
i am insane

12 comments:

  1. Lovely! Original, free and such a pleasant read! Keep writing
    Avinash

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  2. It's a bit abstract..but nice..

    Regards,
    www.simplypoet.com
    Team SimplyPoet

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  3. wow. u write so well.
    Megha

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  4. nice poem!! first time am reading your poem and so well written it is...
    really glad to meet you through twitter :)
    keep writing!

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  5. when 'noor' shines, Love this line.
    nice one, expressions are so true yet the words are tiny.

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  6. beautiful use of words... loved it!.. keep writing.

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  7. hahaha
    love makes us all insane
    but then when was sanity sane?

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  8. thanks a lot everyone! i appreciate the response...

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