Monday, February 22, 2010

~~~...Mann karta hai...~~~

badlon ke beech se jo
ek katra roshni khud ko chhipati nikal aati hai
uske aanchal mein khelne ka mann karta hai

saundhi saundhi si ik
mehak pehli baarish ke baad, jaise ghhul jaati hai
fiza mein, mujhko bhi kho jane ka mann karta hai

khilti kali kholti hai jab
parat-dar-parat khud ko, saare jahaan ko bhati hai
duniya ke samne 'Viti' ko aane ka mann karta hai

chamakti shabnam ho
pankhudiyon par phoolon ki, 'Noor' sa ik laati hai
choom kar uski mithas pi jane ka mann karta hai

9 comments:

  1. Lovely! Keep em coming. I like the 3rd verse the most though :)

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  2. Wow! Well written! Short and sweet! :)

    Bas iss kavita ko padte reh jaoo
    aisa jane kyun "mann karta hai"

    Cheers
    Sanjay

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  3. Bahut khoob!! truly awesome Viti!!

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  4. loved the way you covered a lot of things in such a short meter.... keep up the good work. Keep writing.. just one doubt.. wat is meant by "Viti"?

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  5. ghane baadlo se
    pehli barish ki fuhar me har boond ko
    apne haath se choone ka man karta hai :P

    shabaash kya likha hai keep it up Viti(witty) :)

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  6. Beautiful sweetie
    Keep Writing

    Regards
    Harshita

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  7. thank you everyone yet again for the awesome response :D

    @sanjay: khoob likha hai aur shukriya :)

    @lost_scotoma: 'viti' is my pen name, or takhallus as it is known in urdu :)

    @ani_aset: i love your verse too :D thanks!

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