Tuesday, February 23, 2010

~~~...the muse...~~~

the last cut heals.
i sit and wait for
the miracle.

abandoned sighs
and a rose thorn.
the muse.

numbness of mind
is a cure within
the madness.

12 comments:

  1. lovely viti..just love the different styles that you write in..and what thoughts..loved it :)

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  2. Good one again! Wow! How do you do this with both hindi and english! Equally lovely in both the languages. Keep posting! Will be waiting for the next one. This one needs a definite tweet. Will share!

    Well written! Well done. :)

    Cheers
    Sanjay

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  3. Nice one again! It's got feel and depth.

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  4. abandoned sighs..
    ...
    sighhhh

    well written well conveyed

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  5. lovely :D ur really good :D keep them coming!

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  6. thank you all for reading and the appreciation :)

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  7. "numbness of a mind is a cure within"--wow ...cldnt hv put it better!!

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  8. That line can explain lot of things! #awesome!

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